Andrew,
I love that your story is about what happened to Jesse, yet the story itself is told by someone else’s point of view. It was very well done. Your references such as the Carmen Sandiego joke added a touch of your personality to the story. This was a very difficult topic to write on, ( I mean you chose the meaning of life) but you created a masterful story with drama, intensity, and a human touch. I am so pleased I read your final piece because it was not only interesting and well written, but it also made me feel true emotion. Great job!
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