Gina,
I was very interested to read the finish of your story so I chose “Can You Keep a Secret” as one of the final 3 pieces I had to review. Your build up to the secret is amazing and it leaves so much room for dramatic tension, however I feel that the ending is extremely abrupt. There is a lot of room for expansion and I think you should write more as I don’t even think the story hit the requirements for how much you had to write. I wish you the best of luck in the future because you are a very talented writer who can create a very dynamic conflict.
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